Rising Phoenix Posted May 20, 2003 Salty tears taste sweet When kissed away by another Soft cries and wet moans pierce the night air Hands become motions, kisses come together Lips and tongues meet with a clash Someone sighs, velvety sounds in the darkness Pulse rising, heart beating faster than a lightning flash Breath comes faster, the sound mildly loud in the darkness The muted sounds of delicate fabric ripping in passionate haste A gently deep laugh followed by a mellow high one The sweetest kiss brings forth the sweetest taste A night that started hours ago yet will endure for hours more Lightning traces the path of silky fingertips Tremors bring forth gentle shudders and rising gasps Tender contact with tongues bring moans from two lips Moans that are kissed away by two more Eyes close in sweet agony as pleasure builds on pain Satisfaction carves a path down a pliant body Soft cries rise to the stars “Again, again!” The faint sounds of clothes hitting the floor signal No Way Back Trembling takes over limbs, a passion reaches the sky Giggles reach the moon’s ears, sounds increasing with ardour Soft strokes ignite fire, no one asks why Sounds and motions increase with a deep fervour Gasps become moans, moans become cries that become screams Screams that penetrate the quiet of the night air This emotional and physical spectacle will last the night, it seems Unrestrained, unbridled, uninhibited ecstasy The passion that climbs the sexual mountain reaches the top A soft scream, a hard grunt and you fall over... Right onto your floor...and with a start you see That it was nothing but Lustful Dreams...things that cannot be Cannot be, at least not until your wedding night.... A beginning that will make this sacred ritual right ~*~harmonyangel~*~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted May 21, 2003 Girls, you make me wonna... Superb poems ... the two poems are like a scene from a movie Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted May 21, 2003 harmony ..great topic sis now here iz a lill bariis iyo hilib for our faraxs.. mmmh i think looking at ma mink dimming ma lights grabbing ma candles, dont want bright lighting the room up magical scents,thinkin of his abs crazy base in tha background setting the mood before he pounds Dipping ma velvet skin in a scented bath smiling coz i kno hiz heart wud want to marge i close ma eyes i picture hiz eyes pearcing ma heart az i wrap tha towel slip into victoria secrets,counting the vowels heart stopping coz i hear tha knock thats gonna knock ma pink socks off opening the door his eyes flows down ma creamy, "curves looking dreamy" he sayz hugs me tight and lay his heart beating mine coyping rhythm clothes on tha floor by layerz his touch, careses, kisses wakening ma senses cry slips thru luscious lips az our bodies entertwine with need his tongue erupting ma juices hands cruises ma nips harden hiz need matching all of a sudden moaning groaning Joe's CD blaring fire raging climax breaking shattering Blood racing az we gasp for air pappi carez craddling breathing amidst nite sighin' mmmh.. mmmmmmmhh.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 21, 2003 LOL! Mz-Alpha-Soup, was feeling that one for real. MsWord, masha'Allah, ur words never cease to amaze me. They can make xaar look like malab. On the real though, masha'Allah. Keep it coming, cuz I could learn a thing or two from ya... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 21, 2003 HarmonyAngel, I forgot to give u a well deserved props. I love the way ur rhyme ends. It was sweet, masha'Allah. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted May 21, 2003 MZ_Word: "ta sis" (excuse my cockney!) its well appreciated...love your lil add-on...true power in those words... Jamaal-11: "you make me wonna...." sorry, didn't quite catch that...what was that?? ...thanks ofr tha compliments bruv... Mz-alpha: naa farax ilkiihisaa awaay? Cos they turn me on!! L@@L! Tarrak yuu walaal...much jaceel... Complex-Mind: why thank you...much obliged... Mz-Alpha and Mz_word: loved your add-ons...so let me add some more...give y'all Take Two... slip into victoria secrets,counting the vowels heart stopping coz i hear tha knock thats gonna knock ma pink socks off The red dirac that I slip into for me to wear With excruiting slowness slip on the gold Clothes that I put on, but will soon tear Pleasure experienced, instincts awakened as of old Sweet juices bursting with uncertain power, see the erection of joy able to reach the height of a tower, Trembling wonder rises in two eyes as pain is quickly replaced by pleasure Tender feelings replace the sweet surprise And the feelings rise in a crescendo you cant measure Moaning, groaning, voices intoning The wonder, the elemental rush of feeling Slipping, sliding to the top of the slope Supported by two strong arms Tears kissed away, whispered charms And the storm passed, silence descends Quiet murmurings, sweet whisperings As you fall asleep, you smile a smilef illed with light Secretly, you look forward to the next night ~*~harmonyangel~*~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 22, 2003 Harmony Angel...What does your signature mean? It's in Italian I'm assuming. Correct me if I'm wrong. Just curious to know the meaning...Thnx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted May 22, 2003 Complex-Mind, yes you're right, it is Italian...and you've just asked this question just as I've addded a bit to it :cool: ...but the first bit you asked about says... ~L'amore perso è amore guadagnato ~Ma l'amore perso, è un cuore fatto soffrire stands for Love lost is Love gained but Love lost is a heart pained but now the whole thing says.. ~L'amore perso è amore guadagnato ~Ma l'amore perso, è un cuore fatto soffrir ~Gli anni semplici delle rotture di sospetto ~Di fiducia il relativo duro riguadagnare, che cosa è stato perso una volta ...which says... Love lost is Love gained But love lost is a heart pained Simple suspicion breaks years of trust Its hard to regain, what once was lost ...the poet inside me keep breaking out... ~harmonyangel~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xafsa Posted May 22, 2003 Naa heedhahaya...wax baas baa nugu kiciseen. Damn though...you girls have away with those words...keep 'em coming. peace and luv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 22, 2003 Harmony Angel, that's deep. Nicely worded masha'Allah. So u can write poetry in Italian too? Masha'Allah. Much respect... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted May 22, 2003 ...Complex-Mind...I've got a secret to confess...I've got an Italian Dictionary and Thesaurus next to me.... ...its amazing what you can do with a 'lil bit of help ~harmonyangel~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Complex Mind Posted May 23, 2003 LOL@dictionary & thesaurus... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted May 23, 2003 lol..hamorny...af italian? since when?..bisinka...i gotta come back before i hear u speaking aboriginal or some... ..big props tho.....ima go learn some from my af hindi encyclopedia and drop some hindi shyt like i am mrs kapoor...lol wat does it mean when thoughts wonder to unhidden places loud like thunder az a lay in his arms the aftermath shook me like water in a dam calm feeling tearing thru me his breath soft on ma cheeks az a tear drop caresses ma heart its been too long now ma baby iz in ma arms... the trees swishing amidst the nite needin morning dews sunshine warmth and i feel like its noon he opens his eyez ma heart skips a beat coz i kno am about to fly soft kisses, soft touches his hand brushes feeling ma heart beat our bodies moulding again this time pleasure overiding tha pain volcano erupting his lava flowing am breathless az i feel him shake ooooh mammi, he cradles me coz am baked ooooh pappi, i sigh"if only u knew " i whisper he smilez , nods and mutterz "you are in ma heart" i answer "you are in ma heart" then we close our eyes making sure tha feeling neva subsides... dam suddenly am thinking of marriage...dam harmony u shudn't have started this topic.... now i have to run look fo farax ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rising Phoenix Posted May 23, 2003 LOL...bisiinka, qarxiiska naga daa...I esbeake af reer badiyoo aswell! Thanks for tha props, gurl, and your wonderful poems. I LOVE your rhymes! dam suddenly am thinking of marriage...dam harmony u shudn't have started this topic.... now i have to run look fo farax ... ...well...I can help you with that: Faraxs With Jobs Ltd ...check tha pics & tell me what you think... ~harmonyangel~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted May 23, 2003 Why do I feel like getting married? :confused: Ya'all makin me think beyong datting* ....Love the whole the concept tho* THANK you 4YOUR TOPIC *~HarmonyAngel~* .. Enjoy each and everyone of your poems... Everybody had a good expression 2share... kuligiina waad mahadsantahiin*.... ....................................... Marrage huh? :confused: ummmmmmm give'it'a'though* ......PeaceOut~ PME PeaceMiddleEast ~1~ Vision Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
