runawayvirgin Posted April 23, 2003 You looked at me.. destracted me... Seduced me... Discovered me... Invaded me... Defeated me... And after all...Deserted me! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thinkerman Posted April 24, 2003 Short and to the point. kinda sounds like your dscribing a typical woman walks past guy seen. Its the type of look some ladies like to give to guys just to get their attention. WELL IF SO....ITS ACCURATE . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lovely me Posted April 26, 2003 i love it! beautiful! short and sweet! its cute and its right to the point it was a great poem, and i think you should continue to write more! so lovely Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
