Instinct.Poet Posted April 17, 2003 This Prolly Un-ussual to you, but the ussual to me, I don't never write about love stories, or write poems to impress,NOo I write poetry to regress life is never ending test, see, maybe I live diffrent class of life, were people talk about realities instead of fantasies. But society today is based on"Close you eyes" and Imagine..true.. Mine is more "Open ya eyes" and see. Simple right? No complications..Hope ya feel me.... Now let me write something.... Honestly I can't sleep feel my steep, know is deep lies is belief,hummer is a jeep not so cheap as you seat show pete,to critique so petite,"stop don't leap" honk ya horn so it can peep Damn..Go back home raise sheep The soil you were conceived. Home is sold N'deciet Guilt,is what you plead Blink N'bleed Cry in need?? Yess,indeed Plant a seed Million compete One can lead Hope can concur and keep So ya see, Stomp ya feet Stop the fleet Look back N'retreat No one to beat Nothing to defeat Wave the white sheet Drop the heat Love can succeed Sound so neat? Lets "Ala bari" and meet Eat fresh meat. Qabil :confused: :confused: ???"Kaas diid" We're One Seed Lets walk the concrete Motherland we feed This is your "HOMEGROWN BREED" -------------------------------------------------- I Always feel like I got massege to get across. Thanks for reading,I love ya'll. One world, one soul, One heart, One man, One love, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lovely me Posted April 17, 2003 Intelligent Instinct-Poet .... i love you poetry bro keep up the good wark boo... smille 4 me !!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 17, 2003 U know what happen in Nomadic Expression? Well, keep an eye on---> H.O.M.E.G.G.R.O.W.N.~*~B.R.E.E.D 100bars2Instinct~52 in Nomadic Expression: Lez'C- how far Homegrown will reach~ ---------- ~AmHomeGrown~ ...... As time ticks~ I meet chicks~ Beautiful,& pretty slick~ Mindbendin, Never intendin to hurt me an' sh*t~ Lovin her eyes, lookin at her past pics~ 12years ago she made me drull, Now she makes sick wana spit~ Looks over took her mind power, Now she yammin da D... Excuse my mental pic, dont mean to make ya' brains cells 2split~ Even I hate da words I inflict- And she was causin conflicts~ Hearsay, gun fires my ear play Sounds so instinct~ Restless plus young, jus' missin a gun... Nothin 4fun, give me her manuscripts~ I'll get back on the map, brick by BRICK~ This time ama husband her, no more plain chic~ Beyond my chick am lovin her thick~ Am buck70, step on da scale, am 2bucks from 2/10- so I must be holdin heavey'heat to defeat any pale B*tch~... Am here to protect u baby, hold my hand, lets plot this plan to get real rich~ Cause u carry brains, blessed bodies~ Gifted babies, and pretty ladies~ Some grew 2be shaddy, takin ya' resources~ Like oil, expensive soil, ungerground liquite Gold already on the boil~ Small eyes theifin ya' shorelines for fishin ya fish~ Baby love u got the world eating off ya dish~ Lets make a switch, once again lay u up-> Brick by Brick- So my grandkids could be really homegrown- My kids be ya' breed, am not feelin UK or them Otha chicks~.... Lets Dance My Somali Sweetheart: ....... ~AmHomeGrown~ HomeGrownBreed~no doubt... ...This is one deep poetry rhyme u'll get lost in~ It speaks in metaphore I have 2worn ya~.. Enjoy~!.. .. Peace&Lave~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 17, 2003 ~~~~~~~~~~~~ One~Creater.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Imagine ya thoughts away~ To a day of feelin' da brains'pain, from hunger thats here 2stay~ bellybutton frenchkissin da bck bone, no play~ Imagine da thought of judementday~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One~Creater.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :Smile now, u got choice 4now: Peacin'Out~ Deadly_ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted April 17, 2003 ma belly sizzles thunder ripplez deep in tha core mind blowz heavy words danglez keepin us in a bundle fire ruptures yet we dont capture the essence to break tha barrier its fo us to nature tha mindless seed over feeding our needs wid short-commings like a flower petal in tha morning by nite it curves in shy 'ing we shud embrace not letting tha feeling ebade tha thought makes ma heart flatter blood running thru ma veins in a clutter tryin to squeeze tha life outta me warmth rush to tha deepest core hips rolling some more i think i beta stop before i make his mind flo Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 17, 2003 Hoppin dat was not personal~ Ama say stop b4 ma mind over flowz... ..... Good Verse, nice poetry~ Liked it....Ms-Alpha ... WuN~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted April 17, 2003 Ha ha, You crazy, Vission.. 100barz,more like half way done 100barz. Lovely thanx for the compliment Iz all butter cake like,703to612. Mz-Alpha-Soup,I never seen ya around, good to have you though, looks like we gonna be writing after one another I digged ya lines. Hold another session Teach a lesson Knowledge can be blessing If ya listen Captive in mental prison Glisten on what you missin make it a mission decrease ya tention increase intention grease ya ignition pleaz' ya aggresion Obeist fishin Feast superstition beast is sh!ttin?? Load amunition next on a mission to gushin and run'flushing Oopz I'm pushing massive Cussion like sumo wreslin see mo' asian on yo corrupted nation actin amnesian for what reason? who'z,what,where ,season? moment amusing keyboard abusing winnin or loosing? who'z with susan, hold up she'z in, maybe,is pops she choosin, mixing cocktail,jacuzzin' ma'half sista accusin? Product of 3rd wife Occation half cocasian, Your so""Soma'casian"(Somali+cocasian) so many across the Ocean don't be suprised at what coasts-in... 100% Un-edited... next to "kin"...iz ya'll Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nuzrat Posted April 17, 2003 Yo I feeling you, but in todays world people live in there own fantasy world, istead of stepping out of the box, And if they do they might get hurt that is why they fantasies. All I can say is are sure you can't sleep, Is it that bad. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted April 25, 2003 deep feeling sorez like oxygen intha nose ima pop ma curves enabling nerves like tree swishin in tha midst of tha nite needing within a beat like its a minute heavy on ma thoughts like its granite feedin ma soul wid lyrics like maize n beans mammi freeze pappi on a mission gunzz in ma nozzle heavy artillary loosing sleep like he's on henesy phew mmmmmmh pausing like its tha summer breeze call me yo home precious dream double lacing facing words spoken tender glass broken takin a deep breath time on death. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 25, 2003 ~H.O.M.E.G.R.O.W.N~ Fo'Shoh! .... ~AmHomeGrown~ .... Yo~ U can't read my eyes are 2red~ True said, after few beefs in JamesTown, Lot of dudes ended up dead~ Tear drops from moms~ Sadness on FAM face, pure frowns~ Lot of bodies on the grown~ Buddies lookin 4da clowns, who made da pounds~ Making bounds from city 2 city~ Jus' 2leave behind their unspoken sounds~ Claimin thuged out, but dress code all pretty~ Like Rap videos all soo tempting, girls get witty~ Hell fire comes after this blind bliss~ Feel this... Hell fire comes after this blind bliss~ I suggest u get ya' last kiss from MsRap~ Shyt is turnin crap~ Excuse my lingo, dont mean to tango alone-> but all I hear nowadays is wack~ Rather have that Ol'Schooool Back. Like Hit da Road Jack- an' don' u com' bck no more no more~ Cause u know beef means snatchin ya' moms, rushin ya' lil brotherz & sistaz down 2da Floor~ Sort off in ya' moms mouth~ Imagine sounds soo loud~ Beef burning black, stickin on da pan~ frozen on da mic' wit' emotion, Flippin on da stand~ Sending fear letters in chain. Better send it around Boi, or end up wit' da pain~ Smacks from steels dat dont stain~ Robbin2pay ya rent? what a shame~ Mindless, add this theses to ya' notebook~ Slave on ya' own for ya' own, travel through every nook~ Got cops shooked, imagine how my fellow hustlerz feel~.... Like I got a belly that never runs on empty, cuase I kill~ actually not really, I just spill~ Battle anyone who beefs my will~ in the mean an between times I chill~ Simply cause.... ~AmHomeGrown~ Home Grown--- Home Grown--- Say wa? Home Grown-- Home Grown-- .........Instinct take 'em bars playa... I dont' give 4no reason~ Blaze through this hot season~ Summer time, 2all da Nubians I be pleasin~ an da one who be teasin~ Am leasin....lol.... One!---PS, GoodPostMsAlpha~ .......... PME PeaceMeadleEast 1Lovin~ Deadly..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted April 25, 2003 dayumn deadly vision..high scorez instinct..mmh.. u both makin ma head woozy...lol ima drop like it like its a Zee listenig to cuban music n its deep drinkin for ma baby's milk tonign tha linez makin it neat bugs mecoz this 'mali women feed there brains clutter like they on speed embracin oth nation's needs dam wat happened tp cambaro flex unique like tha colour violet am like shhhhhh like they r potato mush loosin culture needless vultures. dam i say again damn Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mz-alpha-soup Posted April 25, 2003 dayumn deadly vision..high scorez instinct..mmh.. u both makin ma head woozy... ima drop like it like its a Zee listenig to cuban music n its deep drinkin for ma baby's milk tonite tha linez makin it neat bugs me coz this 'mali women feed there brains clutter like they on speed embracin otha nation's needs dam wat happened to cambaro flex unique like tha colour violet am like shhhhhh like they r potato mush loosin culture needless vultures :mad: dam..... ima say again damn. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sYric-STiPHuLLa Posted April 27, 2003 COOL COOL NICE ONES INSTINCT AND deadly props to mz alpha too yoh check it running from what don't know/ bruises and chips on my shoulder/ from what don't know/ from day to day life is a haze/ a multitude of brazen thoroubred graze/ been pumped and readied for years/ just for this blink of a chance this moment/ can't condone it but still have to own this/ hone on it like a beacon/ don't wanna be caught undgaurded/ dead ,defeated and reaking/ man named seek disturbed nervously vibrating/ lookin back need a piss-can't even get a leak/ put time in get out what chu put in/ jumped but still not reachin no rim/ flimsy with kin. but favored "lakiin"/ this one time this little left/ out in sea floatin like a raft/ need a reason to put this fleece on/ to get those keys and start the ignition/ feenin on-like an addict finnish line but no draw/ almost there just a sec. oh no dont' wreck/ get it togeth-er don't float like no feather/ anguish sets in relentless must go on here i come/ what happens after this ;.;what's the sum/ tripped oh no teared a limb/ joggin on pain.stress set in. weak need a hit/ oh god here i pray is this it ........finnit/ oooh la la la ......... ""when u weak i make u strong. here is where u belong..I AIN'T PERFECT but i promise i won't do you wrong...."""'Ladies and GENTLEMen MY name is P.DIDDY... "IS THAT cho chick why she peepin him all up on his grill dont' chu know dat man kill" j A y DASh hoffa< woh'tchah''hollah'atchoh'boiHHHHHHHH Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zynab Posted April 28, 2003 damn that first poem is like the best i heard for days . you got talents my man instinctpoet. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JASMIINE Posted May 13, 2003 am new this forum and this my first time stumpling on the poetry page. WOW! u guys are talented and amasing this will soon be my favorite forum. keep up the good work.......and instint_poet ur really gifted. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
