Benevolent_ Beauty Posted April 28, 2003 Untitled condemned me when i confided in you committed to your every call contributed in your every need even tho u were controllin' i gave my life as collateral made my life a catastrophe shunned me, criticized me with your cruel words said i was deficient, deviant, dissappointin' a lifeless deficit altho distinct, a definite disaster neva alive, always dead but what had i done to be a noticeable nuisance? always naggin' and needin' ninteen years of nuttin' but nonsense was it really necessary all that name-callin' but arguably, analytical, i vied to stay optimistic becuz u opened up my eyes occassionally ommitted feelings honoring the irrelevant irresistable irrevocable encyclopedia of lies you told me never incidental nor was it an imitation of an illiterate inhabitant of you unconscious intellect no! you accomodated it admitted it continue to accumulate it.... i have no idea what this means...but i wrote it over a slice of pizza and a can of coke... hope yall liked it.... SCWB.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 28, 2003 MsWordz~ am feelin all dat foolio BUSH~ Like da way u lay it down for us~LOVELY! ... Benevolent that was some tough poem, over a slice of PIZZA? had 2gasp dem bigWORDS'still~ Felt da depth and found a connectin line I falled in love with... quote: -------------------------------------- but what had i done to be a noticeable nuisance? always naggin' and needin' ninteen years of nuttin' but nonsense was it really necessary all that name-callin' but arguably, analytical, i vied to stay optimistic becuz u opened up my eyes ---------------------------------------- Nice~1 ....... PME PeaceMiddleEast ~1~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zynab Posted May 9, 2003 deadly vision i got so much love for you man you might have heard before but listen to this you got talents so hear this shit i am not white i will never be white don't turn white when i tell you i am not white i'm black yet i write , talk better then you in your own language. this is not poetry but i just hate how white people can't accept the fact that i am somali yet i beat them in everything i put my mind to it so why do they sill treat like i'm different i hate the west i am going back home , if only there was a home to go to. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted July 11, 2003 Had2bring it back.... Ma *Facts of life~*~Fiction in Stipe* Daawada Check-it ... In 79 I was born wit out a sin As the world spins Am making lot of ends Lossin lot of friends Like loose change~ Life is strange~ Plottin plans 2rearange~ Painfully paintin a picture wit' ma Blood'Stain~ Prayless Got me goin aimless Payless So my shoes are not that famous Playless Halla-halla at a butterfly. Shameless! Painless Feel num in ma skull wit empty thoughts_ Sneak brainiac in Parking-Lots_ Got2get ahead :rolleyes: 4life is strife Even after u get a wife Stick 2ya facts of life Skipe on da fiction in stripe Red+Blue+White Put Bush out of sight Pull Dijaal on da side Battle 4ya rights I got answers to give on da MIC 4new borns askin me wats wront wit da world? Basic sins I tell da Boy 2stay away from da Girl. The Girl 2stay away from the Boys world! B4 you flip an fall Make a 5time prayin call Playa ball Floss less I advice this with CONFUSION.... Wish you understand it...it truely makes sense 2some it may sound amusing_ Laughless or da message u be lossin* ~ONE~ Facts of life-Fiction in stripe ~1~ PME Visionary_moments Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted September 20, 2004 High on Humor- Think like Homer- Points I view from a foriegne- Beat the Boss, played the Coach, I even punked the owner. Sleeper held my therapist, talkin'bout (he gonna manage my Anger) Thought of doing drugs in the dark at the park, silly kid fist fought a Po- thinkin' he was some Ranger! Ran through red lights thinking they where green. Ignored more than one murder scene. Chopped undercovers, lawyers and truck loaders. Hell Marry Shift workers, I spoke the tongue of a cat, with the vision of a bat I died twice and that was that_ Now am back hatting girls who be yapping flat! Dudes who thiking wrong weak looking strong sing 'em that nomadic warlord song! Bang Bang couldn't hange James Pond! Time flew I knew they would start me off brand new! Guantanama Bay hey ey what you say will go against you in the court of tribunaral some day. Anyday! take me in am pissed anyway. Living sobar fears fightin' tipsy soldiers~ expression eploiding anoying flimsy giving cold sholders~ NO manners doesn't matter go'on it's Dooms day slap the taste of an elders~ I mean punk and foot chase siniors~ Asking in personal tone, why did our youngn gone dumbn, movinG as their own leaders~ Pops you can't do shhh if he ain't punked by the Cops~ Moms loves 2due to you, but Kids 2day are lost in their own way, feed 'em punishments~ As the world hip-hops. Vision the growing snitch lots, Rich pots boiling to seethe a 2nd riot as the world Watts! Everything passes, good things build and bad things extend to gain' da jin more props~! Sin box. Bin_Lox. Been Oxd. DV-- G2R. Think I just my braincell jus'Popped! .... Bla'bla___'m Lovin'it~ .... ~1~ PME DV Yiea! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted September 30, 2004 DV~ I've been Enjoyin this lyrical joint.. Mad probs to the lates one as well as rest of'em b4. one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
