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~Facts of life, Fiction in stripe~

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They say:

"They say Diversity breeds creativity,

feeds innovation"

Multy thoughts will lead to a better future~

2See Unity in my Community would bring light 2my Nature~

Fatal faults, funny plots,

in racist spots~

Seem to capture us with pressure~

Any given artificial smile,

would set me off to a different measure~

Aggressive from aggression,

am left throwing a fist or giving a lecture~

Some stress, alot lose their minds,

Personally I like to be the inspector~

Suprised? never.

I knew Bush would invade Iraq and battle Saddam,

Although, u should've known his fater was the

Inventor~

New World Order, this war is more than taking over just one Boreder~

We must look at a picture to see what lays under

its Coater~

So I suggest you find you, and get you to a safe place, just in case they mistake your face~

Beat them with your mind, b4 they # your days~

....

Most of are focused on fear, power, fame, and foolishness that will divide us more~

Underscore ur main ideas so you can share the floor with those who have the same vision as you~

Let me be part of your furute, let them in your future, let your self believe in your future, let us all visualize "The Future"...

Facts of Life, are like Fiction in Stripes...

Meaning whats real one time will fade and become artificial the next~

Believing is achieving~

....

Hope u speak your mind aswell'

Asalama Caleekum*

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Paragon   

"Fatal faults, funny plots,

in racist spots~

Seem to capture us with pressure~

Any given artificial smile,

would set me off to a different measure~"

 

You got that right DeadlyVision.... nice piece u got there

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Deep..

Facts of Life, are like Fiction in Stripes...

Meaning whats real one time will fade and become artificial the next~

Believing is achieving~

Is kinda nice to see some one you can relate with.

P.O.E.T

Facts of stripe YA'LL

Facts of stripes

 

Red+Blue+white=Violence

Ominous dominance, I've often taught against the promise of violence

The belief of distruction of apocalypse

I speak my mind like 2pacs lips

The problem-is my providence too many fatherless

babies manifest the world "less"

Autonomous, Masjid's and their prominent-monuments

reminds us of dailly mind sets

and power the balances

the west populous has surely altered its documents

And it's flawed intent to model its occupants

subliminally soon to destroy your cautiousness

honestly, i have reason to rig sign of abnoxious

see knowledge is a confident consciousness

unless ya really worried of consequesnces

I wish i stood in front of ya'll honesness

tell ya whats cauzin' fraudulent nauseous ness

I'm lost in it, for the sake of peace I remain at ease

my venomous fangs unleash in sacred speech

Condemning fake-beliefs,

I blame the beast for this age-of feast that hatred-brings

Now, i don't even know if i should blame the stripes'

i just had relapse

maybe we're like woderous mice

out to for hunger to get cheese slice

Our lives, wrapped in an idea far from love and yes, hate-deceives

Create relief in ardious dreams.....

 

 

-----My Vissonz Not Deadly,I wear opticles-----

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Under da infuence of Words~am into dis ya Heard!

....

Love beats ma heart fast~

Hate scratches da scar from ma past~

Mixed feelins confusin' my emotions~

Do I love or hate?

Let me debate in motions~

Past peers, I hate 'em~

Present year, got me contemplatin~

See a tunnle in my future obligatin~

What comes after is soo close to my heart...

Is like faith, makes me automatically smart~

Play my part, judgeless~

With a beat, I get a sense of ya' realness~

Right from da start~

I write not even knowin how u be feelin dis~

Readin'dis~

U may think I got an illness~

Not knowin U suffer when I suffer

feelin' soo plum:

Holdin it down, contrary 2where I come from:

Hate*love at the same time,

I heal ya' sickness with care~

I share, love, hate little-

Seems like am always caught up in the middle~

Aw'Found ma self in another riddle~

In my house, in my face, sweatin bullets.

They shottin gunz&missiles tryin 2get me to scare~

BOOM! am scared of the men IN MY TV BOX: Ahaaah!

Nothin physical all mental, I think with despair~

Halla back at da box: say~

I was walkin lookin fo' yo'as, than u threw sa'um

THIS AINT FARE!

"Fare?"->

Command me 2a moment of silence,

Aw'one of dem got shot~

 

There goes my freedom of speech~

Get dumb an Ask: Why is ya' flag half'way down?

Than they start to stare~

I start 2glare~

Now am part of the beef~

I say u got an illness, give me room for my feet~

Safe terrain become battle grounds,

I can only breathe 2defete,

or ama be left for dead on the street~

or home, this is shown~

Within my own, Moms choppin qaat,

Pops chewin qaat~

White man askin whats thaat?

While siblings run around doin' all they can find~

Lost with a blurry vision, pass me back the map~

Think am blind...Hope u got vision?

Dear God: let me see things with my mind~

My eyes sight can't see da landmines~

Help me find my way, walk me through~

All I trust is you~

Guide me str8~

Am goin stray with lot of games to play~

Can u see?

If u do, guide me str8~

Am goin stray with lot of games to play~

FAM can only advice me 2pray~

I Do- with faith but comes another day~

A different battle, same grounds~

Different cats, same ol' pounds~

Boundin ma head I wonder away~

Only if I take the same steps as yesterday...

But, changed up my ways~

I jus' may

Jus' may live through another day~

The same bad day from yesterday~

 

.....

Let me know if u feel ur only free in ya'

own mind?...

....

Hope all this writin practice works out,

Cause am not carrin what am sharin~ so long as its real, ama spill 'em on this page-good or bad however u may feel, am here 2chill-relax..bla'bla~

.....

..

Hold it down peepz~

~"No one knows my struggle, they only see the troubles, not knowin is hard 2carry on when no one love U" 2Pac~.RIP.Can't hope hell for anyone..

...

WuN!

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Yow-4get YOU!..I GOT ME ONE~

.....

Uderstand am nothin Nice~

....

P lease be wise~

U nleash da' vision in yo' eyes~

S ee, things come 2u wit' suprise~

S ARS part of da Wars price~

Y esss ur it, far from lies~

Son be real~

..............

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Yoh'Yoh~

Yoh~

Focuse wich'ya vision~

Practicin' 4perfection~

Prepare 4rejection~

Listen in'on da lesson~

U missin out on da mission~

Miss'd out on da session~

Stop da bloody wishin~

Only speak wit' an action~

Cock'back & start blastin~

What is it that ur askin?

Wana know if I got an accent~

Yeah~

It's in English thats all broken~

RPG over'ma shoulder,

Yes.

Nomadically walkin~

Hate 2shut me up,

MaaN am still talkin~

More serious than acute heart attack,

Personality neva' jokin~

High school Coaches I've been chokin~

See me around GTA smokin~

Hustle so I won't be loafin~

Rather bust a skull than 2b askin,

Calm quite wit' fire between my toes~

...bla'bla

......

Some pay money, some expect money 2write like this~....Add a beat and its YOURS~...

...

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OH OH

DEADLY VISION PUTTIN IT UP YOH I BEEN OUT FOR AWHILE BUT I'M BACK

 

look look look see look

 

 

1,2.3 4 5

still alive kickin/ rippen up crowds//

let me gett at them..let me get this oh check it

 

...jay never sweat jay never quit/

jay out on the black gettin smiles and sleek stances...gettin glances from them fancy felines./

nuttin but lions in this game/ out for the fame naah homie(aha) i keep it real and say away from the lame/ hay they say when i come thru / on yo block is just the way i be limpin... str8 out the dome to ya' home my words keepin yo eyes stared focused./ gettin you runnin slow on leg braces homie u fonna have glimmers of 'forest gump'/// i'm the dun the keep the lumps in mc's throats ..ho' just wrote that spittin like a venomous reptile/check my profile nomad till the sun sets up on the wake of dawn// livin dreams like a fairy tale fawn....

 

 

i freestyled i didn't even think to look back but if u like it ripp this back up

 

let's put the poetry back on the map yalll wun luv

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~GraveYard~:cool:Shift~

lol...Gunzman Tenacious...lol

No doubt~...Notice how I give everyone 100bars?...

Check it--

Like de ol'school I came 2wreck it~

Inject it wit' lyricz,

Now inspect it~

Metaphors~

Wise wordz in underscore~

cussin 2make cutz, body'slam 50 down 2da floor~

Yee 'yeh- big'up 2Gillie, da no'mad'somali~

Happier than Gilrmore~

Hot shots, feel more~ like rich beef on poor~

Bloods I purr, feel soo pure~

My after math drama, U feel soo sore~

Deal u pain on every feelin~

Sweet dreams 'bout cop killin~

All soo sweet, like gettin head from Tweet~

Bck on da streetz, Musclin!

Hustlin see Mob'Deep Strugglin~

Bum Alcoholics Stumblin~

Fumblin Nas thinkin he on a higher class~

Beefin JayZ since he was a baby,

let dat niggas rhymez Pass...

Pac dead as Biggie said, Life after Death~

Some wild out lose their mindz health~

Die 4Rap till they lose their breath~

Loose their headz, snooze they're dead~

Foreigners holdin it down,

Happy like smiles from a clown,

givin out nomadic PounZ~

Gasta'movin, shootin everybody 2da groun~

waz goin DOWN?...

He chewin sa'in, plus he lookes zoned ouT~

Step aside 2see was it all about...

In full park 11pm dark, nigga started 2spark~

Blowin brainz, rainin shankz got him on da chart~

Eye on da look out, war broke out, he broke out!

Shib'shib! no speakin mout'~

.......

Wonder How Many Killers Fleeted Somalia?~....

.......

lol~ Get Me Psychiatrist...dont feel normal

...my words got power over me...

 

PeaceMiddleEast..

Gunzmen~ who said capet bom us with ecstacy?

and what kind?

......

1~

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J.Lee   

Dayummmmmmmmmmm! deep I guess now I know why they call Somalia the land of Poets cause y'all the TRUTH but anyway here is little some thing I wanted to drop......

 

I've traveled this awkward stage, where the trail's continously narrow

And temporary daylight can be blackened by a glimpse of wrong...

Where words made my brain settle with ease

And nevertheless expanded seconds don't seem that long...

 

My foot bears sign of wear, discomfort, but can be easily adjusted

A fate of indecision fately met a vague light...

Where tears lie forbidden against your belief or will

And eyes adapt to the unknown, the worshipped friend of night...

 

And with blood thicker than water, my experience contradicts

Because life is a voyage, on sea, land, or afterlife is blocked...

Where my sight was not, and my friend you were

CLEARED VISION is ahead and I walk alone not...

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SICK WIT THIS...i come flowin like the fortelled rivers of heaven.. witty mind as bright as the river of milk...sweet as honey this brother flow like heaven....honey and milk oh did i forget to mention the whine shiit..seven years been in this forbbidden city.612 whether it's yo artery or vein don't really matter have u staring at ink blots> u okay>>line em up yall check it..

 

freestyle .freestyle brutha jay showe me what chu got<

 

summer here never been more aware/

rare beauty..hoochies on tanktops*been coming out/

is been awhile back on the nomad map/ did u hear they done shut my admin acces down/ oh i guess he didn't like post but who cares/ my ill lit's is rare to the bone..lone ranger firing shots from 45.caliber//and ya'll never heard of me/ sick wit flowz /always itichin on trigger finger/ poetry still lingerin in my throat/ sing like optic vocals make u see a clear picture/ lyrically ascended..always on a different page// this ain't talent this hard rage// self hatred and boiling points passed/ call me up when i reach absolute zero'// breakin grounds like a shaken*up san fransciso// my ill words come to ya like a machine mette' peircin ya at the speed of light have u doin the harlem shake :eek: 'brrrrrdd*what happened to dat boi.<

the rennaisance man <<< keep it gunnin*

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WhatsDaBoilinPointMaPeoplez?...HelloW!

........

Halla'bkc'Hallow Heads~

........

Fillin up pages in camel milk threads...

Somaliaonline having msWord bakin sweet bread...

As a Northerner citizen the more I know-

is like the more I feel ignorant~

Knowledge makin' me wonder how much I don't know-

as much as I feel like a Tenacious immigrant~

Feeling instinct on my side and its poetry~

Nature flow, here I go, wit' wordz in tango~

Mash u like mango, still hungery tho~

.....

You-a-Yo-yo-I-only-flo-flow~

I eat faster than a Moryaan~

Bad news like Goryaan~

Low temper like a Marqaan~

Afweeyne like Marexaan~

No Qabiil shiit~

Nacnac hoo aa inacin fill a seat~

Afweeyne had us beefing jus' 2eat~

Qabiil this, tribe that~

Now thnx to asiga iyo some otha dudes,

We got labeled rude an' can't fight back~

No job, no food, waite up on ya' Shab~

Stay shib, aint no one here 2give u a hug~

Eedo relax ya self, I got a mind 2help seak~

Adeer dont make me knock u 4da way u speak~

Saaxiib ease up, b4 I make ya' body freeze up~

Would someone please cease da beef

happenin all over da middle east...

Yariisay stay home stay away from da streets~

All u'll find is a ugly beast, talkin about he

will make you feel at ease~

Take u to flick and chucky cheese~

walk outa chuckies like a jiis~

Aw Please!

Nothin' happened u jus' kissed~

He tried u hit it but missed~

Eases lookin left down, tryin 2avoid da diss~

whats this?...another riddle, Googaaaaaaa!

........

...

~PeaceMiddleEast~

PME

1livin1lovin1creater

~1~

Vision:Deadly

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LOL DEADLY

 

YARIISAY STAY HOME STAY AWAY FROM THE STREETS"""

 

 

GOOD SHIT MAN..L

 

 

WHERE THE maddd ppl at droppin dimes in herrr...

 

giving accent like i was in st'loius riddled like i was on batman..... not immature just mature purely satisfactional left the IM in immature so all da hot honeyz can "Instant"Messege" me..lol

 

yoh peace out y a'll

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J.Lee   

bad news like goryaan.....explicit anyway I'm on some different shit...so let me be express my feelings....I just thinkin' about some of the bullshit that bush says and how people eat it up like they are suffering from starvation....so here it is a quick keystyle..might be off but it is a fact of life......

 

just take a listen. yes, it's us who make the victems.

hate fulfillment so WTC initials stand for wake the children.

it's the shameful kids with pain who hope for they lives,

to close up and die then shoot a classmate for somebody to open they eyes.

it's no suprise. George Bush with speeches of wisdom?

then declaring war on Iraq like it's the citizens who did shit?

no, it's the image we impose, brainwash with little facts,

until ESPN starts covering these military drafts.

yes, that's more like it plus a box of ammunition,

for the country, where you could get locked up for religion.

yes, that's exactly it, now add some captions.

CNN blasting, Vidal Gore said Bush's weopon of mass distraction.

now statics casted over eyes at a cynical pace.

**** the wool, 'cause we now live in the digital age.

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