Paragon Posted February 27, 2003 Amused is I, with created complexities, Of mechanisms of which the darkness, is daily chased by heavenly brightness, How do contraries from one prism stream? Wonderous is blackclay that turns a-green! And knows how miracles of green occur! From green Gods knows how comes a white! Only He makes hearts hold joy and cry. How we smile a minute and yet the next cry, How we fail a day and yet never quit to try. Or how we kill a man, but yet ache for peace, Or how we slander each other, yet say please. Or how we marry, split, break yet make-up, Or how we love, hate, disown, yet meet up. Or make and break, gain and loose, yet live Or sin, pray, stray, disobey, but yet believe. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akademik Posted March 6, 2003 I gotta honestly say. i felt you bruh. Is never easy for a person to get my attention But, damn. deep felt. for real. made sense.. Big ups... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thinkerman Posted March 19, 2003 That was deep Jamaal, the poem had a great flow. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lovely me Posted March 20, 2003 may i take this time to bow in praise jamaal.. Nothin But Luv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xafsa Posted March 28, 2003 jamaal..lug iyo gacan baan kuu taagay. You got alot of talent....It really got me...siiba the last verse.... Good Job peace and luv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted March 29, 2003 Thanks my dear Nomads....I am glad you enjoyed that poem. Thankx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ahmed36 Posted March 30, 2003 jamaal may Allah increase your knowledge...u are really talented in the real sense of the word..Please make more poems about the Beuaty of Islam....Iman...Ihsan and faith and believe in Allah...the Almighty...the All-Knowing...the Sustainer...the One who made you talented in poetry. Praise be to Allah. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted March 30, 2003 Awoken from a dream, sleepily i staggered, Just to find a child across the green field. waving, singing "I bet you can't reach this far" "I can't?" I asked "I traveled more than just far", "I've journeyed across all lands and endless seas" "So who are to think I haven't gone adventures?" "This journey" the child said "leads you to death" "I waited long" I said "To stop relying on breath" !And today I am ready for death! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadlyVision Posted April 1, 2003 JAMAAL... ... don't know if ur serious..but I kinda had a dream like that..... it was a multi-dream though...I woke up three times...twice I was close to death, the third time I passed out~ than woke up. .... I felt that poem tho...nicely done~ ..One'Livin~ peace Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
