ProPaiN Posted October 11, 2002 Sup peeps, i just felt like writting, didnt know what' so here it goes! I am pain tell me how many can indure my name i am pain the force to reassure your flame i am pain be your friend when you got nothing to gain i am pain just point at me, if you got nothing to blame i am pain deeper than tha ones you usually feel, stronger than tha ones you can heal i am pain I am with you when you are sick on ya bed an you know no one will even come to see you dead i am pain the kind that brings neva ending migrane i am what u feel right after u step infront of a train or right after u had a bullet fired on ya lane i am pain i am with you when you loose your fiance to your bestman or brother or u see some one in front of your eyes rapping your mother I am pain the kind that leaves ur body confused with out answer like when u sufferin from cancer an u loosing all of your hair the kind of pain u feel when u get on an electrical chair I am pain I am when you hear some one dissin your people an your people hold you back, an tell you we aint really equal i am pain tha kind that is so dark makes you numb all over like when u catch your wife cheatin with tha man u chose as a chauffer or when u find out tha man you hate tha most is actually your son's lover I am pain u feel me when your husband abuses you, and brings da mistress to the house an u see her in your room happily wearing your blouse I am pain, i do exist in your everyday lives bet you only thought i come from only fire an knives I am pain tell me how many can indure my name i am pain the force to reassure your flame i am pain just point at me, if you got nothing to blame i am pain be your friend when you got nothing to gain i am pain do you know my name? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sMiLeY Posted October 11, 2002 it's a nice poem.....but why u so negetive for ??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Precious_Flame Posted October 11, 2002 Pain is nuttin' compared to luv cuz after pain comes the day after and after that comes a whole lotta laughter with ur friends, n' luv parner comes a day wit no signs of rain, no place for pain but wit luv u laugh harder throw away ur day, it don't matter shed a tear, grap ur partner lust & loss, u'll get smarter still cryin', u feel sadder like u wanna die, ur hearts shattered call ur friends up, spin_da_platter n' joke about da dayz, u used to be fatter cuz wit luv, it only gets better n' once again luv beats pain written by da One_N_ONLY Precious_Flame Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paragon Posted October 12, 2002 Nice poem ProPaiN I thought pain is the sister of love Me thought no pain means never fall in love Pain is they say the traditional route to love Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProPaiN Posted October 12, 2002 pain and love cannot be compared and if u try you might as well be visually impaired because love ends with pain and you say it comes after how can u love after one hurts you, that u must explain once you feel pain, it will stay with you forever you can fall inlove with someone, but not love them forever and the scars will show, if u have pain you will know it will give you power' while love consumes your every hour pain and love cannot be compared because there is a difference in the way they are shared Some one with pain you will know the extent of how they feel but you approach one in love and you dont even know if they love is real of course there is place for pain why do you think they say no pain no gain pain makes you stronger' makes your heart last longer because in pain there is no need for heart breaking it is like you are a burnt out fuse' and you have nothing to lose now tell what would be real, if pain wasnt part of the deal pain! the only thing to blame the only scape from shame to conquer it gives you name pain! with roots so deep makes even grown man weep Pain! it can happen to you, it can happen to me it is only fair to say it is stronger than love- an everyone agree Pain- all u can do is feel me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted October 12, 2002 Finaly a spot you can write anything.. Express and refrane thoughts of manything The flow that’s so addictive, its mixed with the asperin' sickness of a mind free of prisons, so just sit down and listen to exactly what i'm spitten whether it’s spoken or written my intentions are mostly liftin, how I can take a rhyme and twist it into the definition of a prism as I take time sittin, masterin my craft like an invention, hard at work thinkin, that sometimes I’m ahead of myself but the moment I take to rest, will I only regret that I’ll slowly regress and didn’t take efforts to better myself to produce what I know is my best, I can only expect, to have success when I’m calm, collected, and I’ve settled myself, so I write with pinpoint precision, like surgeons incisions, so absurd is my vision, I feel lonely on another level myself... >>>> Feel free to add on <<<< Some of your Originals lines ..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Instinct.Poet Posted October 12, 2002 Sit with me-And ponder with a nomad for Once. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akademik Posted July 29, 2003 O.k so you chose to write with pinpoint precision, like surgeons incisions,and absurd with your vision?? but i chose a different path, my own reflection show no deception just predilection for tearin through yo section like a lethal injection capital penalize and mesmerize minimized yo lifestrand command my own understanding without no planning hip hop is poetry to its fullest but people use it to bulllshit to get the green while actin hella obscene showin today's youth somethin different from the truth its like growin up not knowin your roots so i came with the vision to make dumb on you listen to the prism break em down like defense mechanisms but still they wishin for dreams of the ritches and still dont get my message Feels good to be back...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
