Hibo Posted April 21, 2002 Many know the game of expression in words. I'm like artist i write what i feel at the moment in rhyme like. My Words are subliminal, Find the hidden massege. Its been like ten or five //since i first realized why// i was alive// stuck...stopped// f@ck...im locked// contained arranged// and in pain// goin insane// my brains keeps tryin to refrane// as rain flows// slow yet has a hold// takin over// im shakin and colder// as i grow older the thoughts from the past smolder// the last bolder i pass over// where is this way going// my pace slowing// my face growing// time flys by// and i try but in the end just lie// why i don’t know// but the truth is i wont know// don’t flow and im cold// so cold i cant feel my feat// what i need it some real heat// still defeat is close// i need some hope// need somethin to cope with// somethin to boast with// panicking, handling, banishing the evil from my soul// realizing, fantasizing tantalizing the cold and as i grow older// i grow bolder// realize the truth and turn colder// i need to change position// re arrange my mission// and strain to glisten// my brain don’t listen// it wont let me use it// ever since i over abused it// so i put thought to music// and use it to voice my opinion and prove it// don’t screw with my views if// you like breathing// or you might be weasin// with out a reason im seizin up your trees and traditional seasons// my reason being i don’t like seein you leavin// Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hibo Posted April 21, 2002 Sunset, wow, keep 'em coming. That was good. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
too legit Posted April 23, 2002 lovely....i really like it (da~answer)(aka)(2legit)....1 luv. ------------------ i answer wit rhymez do they fit ur ?ton. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hibo Posted May 7, 2002 Done..Sorry i took it out. too good to bite.lol [This message has been edited by Leamante (edited 05-07-2002).] [This message has been edited by Leamante (edited 05-08-2002).] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hibo Posted May 8, 2002 If that ain't a lyrix. i dunno what is. Show love........Good is, good does. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xafsa Posted May 9, 2002 Sunset brotha you got talent.........Keep the words coming. peace and luv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
