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*If I only had a minute*

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Hibo   

I do cherish poetry........so don't feel offended.. I might post many poetry.. just hang on n enjoy the ride smile.gif

 

If I only had a minute, there would be so much I could do

Just trying to make you smile and laugh, showing that I love you

And to kiss you from head to feet until I would have a taste

But knowing deep down inside, that that minute was in a haste

 

To hold you only for a minute would seem like a second in a year

While my time without you would be an eternity of tears

That would flow through the hands of time until rust had its way

Covering my broken heart to every beat that slowly withers away

 

But if I only had a minute, oh there would be so much done

Knowing that I had little precious time to steal away the moon and sun

And to place them into your hands, telling you to hold them ever so tight

And I would tell the sun to brighten your day, and the moon for the night

 

As the sand would pour through the hole, there to determine our destiny

Nothing could ever get in the way, not even the bitterness of reality

 

That seems to bite down on us so hard that it could crush our heart

I know deep down inside, that not even time could pull us apart

 

A minute would never be enough, or even a lifetime at that

To know everything that there is to know of such a soft gentle soul

That covers my heart, even during the coldest of times

The times when Time was so cruel, doing all those god-forbidden crimes

 

But only a minute would be enough or a second if needed

To show my love for you, and without how much my heart would bleed

 

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unixguru   

You know you can do a lot in a minute or second... if your going at the right speed that is…time in a moving system will be seen by a non-moving viewer to be running slower. Its called time dilation : )

 

If a person is in a system (say a space ship) that’s moving at a speed that’s 0.999999 the speed of light, for everyday that person on the ship passes through, a viewer outside the system will pass through almost 2 years. Weird right... subxanallah

 

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If I had a minute.. I would divide it

equally and spend it this way...

 

15second to say good bye to loved one's

10sec to to remember the good & the bad times.

20sec. To worship Allah the Almighty.

10sec's To Kiss and Hold the man I love

10sec's to give my boss the Middle finger smile.gif

Wait a minute? How many seconds are in a minute? smile.gifsmile.gif

 

 

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Btw... Hibo since U like Poetry So much I thought I do share with you this piece by Max Ehrmann... I've been touched by it walaahi! anyway.. enjoy.

 

 

Love some one-

 

in God's name love some one-

 

for this is the bread of the inner life,

 

without which a part of you will starve and die;

 

and though you feel you must be stern,

 

even hard, in your life of affairs,

 

make for yourself at least a little corner,

 

somewhere in the great world,

 

where you may unbosom and be kind.

 

ME...

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Ok unixguru spit it out? who broke your heart? why Don't you like 'love poems'? there must be a reason as to why you don't want us to post them? It's Alright brotha we have all been there.... U know? the Heartbreaker hotel wink.gif

 

Love is sweet misery or as R. kelly put it "There's no such thing as a no good woman.

Every no good woman was made no good by a no good man."

smile.gif

 

Cia later........

 

 

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unixguru   

Fatima abayo, I hate to break it to you but I have never been a resident of the Heartbreak Hotel. And I have never been in love. Maybe that’s the reason I can’t stand these “love poems” because I can’t relate. I don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing frown.gif

 

[This message has been edited by unixguru (edited 11-11-2001).]

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Be VErY vErY worried unixguru!! Man... I thought I was dealing with a guy Who have been heartbroken but you Never even experience it? WOW!! Man you got to "Relate" Sooner then Later.. If we don't have 'Love' In our Lives then What 'Life' do we have to Live?? Life is nothing without love brotha, We all got to "relate" to it smile.gifsmile.gif They say "Love will not appear in command by one's heart,

But will reveal itself one way or another unexpectedly"

 

Don't worry brotha it will come to you Naturally without your knowing.....I'm waiting for that Damn Love Boat Myself wink.gif

 

 

Cia Later....

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Hibo   

Thnx folks.........especially LadyFatima.. girl.........I love Max Ehrmann... I think he is one of the best poets ever. thnx that poem of his was one of the first poems to inspire me in writing poetry.....but thnx sis......i love it!

 

Unixguru: I got the pic........thnx but I would rather end my minute in the mounts of love than anything else....but Alas u r missing that feeling so how would u even know! U keep on threatening me bro...what do u plan to do? Or the fact that u missed out on the life itself is somewhat unappealing to u? No offense intended though!

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unixguru   

That was very offensive... Don’t offend me... OR ELSE...

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Hey am just playing you… I didn’t mean to sound threatening... I’ll change my tone smile.gif

 

LadyFadumo,...I'll keep an open mind.

 

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Hibo   

Nimco: I couldn't say any better sis... Indeed its what makes life.. blossom!!

 

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"All colors of the heavenly rainbow

can be found through ever nation...

When all these colors are blended,

black become God's greatest creation"

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unixguru   

love makes life worth living?

 

I don't know... That sounds good coming out but I don't know how true it is...

 

Let me try to think what makes life worth living:

 

thinking...

still thinking...

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...still thinking

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...eureka!! biggrin.gifbiggrin.gif...Living makes life worth living...atleast for me

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YAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNNN.

 

It's weak And a fantasy. All I have to say is GET REAL PEOPLE. The world is a much more cruel place than what your Imagining.

 

 

"You guys should be on Lowered Expectaions"

 

 

Hibo #345

 

"Hi I like poetry Here's one of them If I had one second BLABLABLABLABLA

---YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWNNNNNNNNN

 

Lowered expectaions is a part of mad tv for those who remeber it you know what I'm talking about.

 

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