hey i don't think i eva read any of jamal-11's poems but iam pretty sure they are good. but my favorite poets in the forums has to be guled92 and deadlyVision. guled92's poetry is is nice and sweet, i hate reading love poems but i gotta give it up to him. DeadlyVision-his poetry is more realistic, talks about the world around us and how he feels about it.

OH BROTHER Brother to ma left, brothers to ma right Brothers assuming they’re so damn bright And brothers opposite of polite. You can roll up in you fancy cars, and shiny jewels But as I watch, I observe nothing but fools. What is it about the female body that generates you to drool? Stop for once and not think with your dicks, And I know ya’ll adore them chicks But that simply will make you look like a cluster of pricks. Oh you a pimp cuz you got lisa and mona to open up theirs legs And fertilize their eggs Simply cuz your name is Greg? I know you’re too busy looking down ma shirt Or struggling to look up ma skirt While you attempt to flirt. You’ll say anything and everything to get me into bed So later on, you have plenty of dreadful rumors to spread Just so your ego is fed. Ma face is up here, not on ma chest In your eyes I am undressed I hope you have succeeded on you quest. What’s the pleasure in ‘hit and run’? Ma bad, ya’ll consider it to be some fun As if it’s some trophy you’ve won. Ignorant as u might be, u feel all women are the same But you are not to be blamed, you outta feel ashamed You’re just too stupidly lame. So u refer to me as a *** and a *****, does that make u a genuine man? Or is it just u think you can Even though you’re a scrub without a plan. You claim to be 22, but mentality wise, you’re a 2 Nah! A 2 would have a lil’ more clue Don’t hate, I only speak of what I believe is manifestly true. Help a sistah out and clarify the thrill in playing gurls like toys From Toronto to Illinois, there must be some sort of joy But hey, I came to the conclusion that ya’ll are for eternity lil’ boys.

this is all i gotta say........................... HALLE BARRY!!

hey nasir i totally agree with u, i mean it's ALWAYS the same ol' thang. i thought about ma wedding (insha'allah) and it's definatly gonna be different hopefully. you know how most somali ppl have their weddings in a hall, well i was thinking more like having it on a cruise ship if not have it outside, and instead of arriving in a limo, arrive in a horse carrage. i would wanna have those ice scalptures and the music would be 50% somali(iam somali after all) and 50% hip hop/R&B. there's ma idea!!whatchu got?

hey CM! that poem was sweet and touching,keep up the good work!kepp 'em coming!

Guled...damn!yet another master peice. fo'real that was very ouching, u actual had me in tears, i love it!

guled! iam loving the poem! it wasn't really too mooshy mooshy and i enjoyed reading it! keep it up! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~treat ppl the way u want to be treated and always but yourself in the otha person's shoes!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

OH BROTHER Brother to ma left, brothers to ma right Brothers assuming they’re so damn bright And brothers opposite of polite. You can roll up in you fancy cars, and shiny jewels But as I watch, I observe nothing but fools. What is it about the female body that generates you to drool? Stop for once and not think with your dicks, And I know ya’ll adore them chicks But that simply will make you look like a cluster of pricks. Oh you a pimp cuz you got lisa and mona to open up theirs legs And fertilize their eggs Simply cuz your name is Greg? I know you’re too busy looking down ma shirt Or struggling to look up ma skirt While you attempt to flirt. You’ll say anything and everything to get me into bed So later on, you have plenty of dreadful rumors to spread Just so your ego is fed. Ma face is up here, not on ma chest In your eyes I am undressed I hope you have succeeded on you quest. What’s the pleasure in ‘hit and run’? Ma bad, ya’ll consider it to be some fun As if it’s some trophy you’ve won. Ignorant as u might be, u feel all women are the same But you are not to be blamed, you outta feel ashamed You’re just too stupidly lame. So u refer to me as a *** and a *****, does that make u a genuine man? Or is it just u think you can Even though you’re a scrub without a plan. You claim to be 22, but mentality wise, you’re a 2 Nah! A 2 would have a lil’ more clue Don’t hate, I only speak of what I believe is manifestly true. Help a sistah out and clarify the thrill in playing gurls like toys From Toronto to Illinois, there must be some sort of joy But hey, I came to the conclusion that ya’ll are for eternity lil’ boys.

IndvDuLitY I am my own person! I am one of a kind! I am the friend you always sought, I am the sister you always desired, I am me! You can hate on me, that won’t harm me in anyway, it won’t fracture my bones, it won’t bring tears to my instruments of vision. Haters will constantly hate, why? Because I am better than you, or is it my status symbol? STOP hating and start congratulating You can attempt to bring me down or put me down but I am more sharp and mightier than that…it’ll only make me stronger to achieve, finish, and accomplish my objectives in life. Aim high to divert me from good, but I assure you I’m no imbecile. You’ll just stroll out as a fiasco. I get what I want, when I want it, that doesn’t make me spoiled, I only work long and hard to reach for what I intend to complete and I experienced to never give up, giving up would only make me look like a fool. IMAGE! Who am I to impress? You can think and speak what you wish about me, I am not the type to really care. Frugality of my energy I try to sustain, its better put to use positively. A Gemini who promenades with such confidence, never to falter. I may appear to be haughty, but hey! I was taught not to judge a book by its cover. I’ll be the life of your party, the centre of attention ‘cause wherever I go I am spotted like bright neon colors. Who are you to tell me about beauty? I am not the average girl on a magazine cover, but an authentic definition of an African beauty. I will impose my opinions and speak my mind whenever and wherever, after all I do strongly give credence to the freedom of speech. Never underestimate yourself is a lesson in life I came to gain knowledge of and plus to continuously go the extra mile. An ambitious female with far above the ground hopes and dreams and isn’t about ‘talk’ but ‘action’.