Salam That was a very nice flow Keep up the work

^ can we stick to Somali or english please at least a language the majority can understand or at least translate for the rest of us. Last time i checked this was SOMALIAonline

I never thought he was lyrically gifted...guess i was right Instead of being on Nas's back he should've worked on his lyrics. What more can i say it was about time he retired...theres just so far good beats can take you

Nicely done. Very simple yet quite meaningfull

...After everything that is said.. ...It boils down to me and you.... ^^ nicely said nice poem jamaal.....keep it up

when the night s are cold and days are dark some look around for the light they start dreaming of a certain feeling desperately wanting, even praying... In need of this crazy feeling that got some bleeding I decided to add to 1 maybe my heart he will put on a high rate maybe my mind he will stimulate the search began, Zion was officially hunted truly wanted and very much needed blinded by my hopes I pointed my arrow in the hopes of findind a fly one instead I got cheated and felt on a black crow despite the obvious 1 still got added to 1 and so the addition began at first the sky was blue and every sentenced ended with you emotions got quickly thick and I became more then just another chick mathematically my heart beats multiplied despite the beautiful scene in his eyes I could see the scheme even in the best light he made me feel less then bright but see I was high on my hopes drugged by my dreams the drums of my heart was multiplying by the minute the tempo was made loudly yet genuinely through a fog of deceit I still stood hoped for this emotional weather to become better but soon the simple addition got multiplied and 1 got bitter a substraction was badly needed so 1 chosed happiness over lust and today 1 smiles like the sunrise, trust!

i wanna dance to some crazy beat let my moves make you feel the heat but i can’t cause im stuck.... in this jungle of hyenas I, the gazelle still stand no one knows how, lost in his shine, i believed he was fine his shadow even excited the fan in me though his words never reached my soul his lips spoke my language young and blinded by his light I honestly thought he was right wrong I was indeed cause in the mist of his greed my heart still bleeds they say mistakes happen and life is a ***** dust yourself off and keep trying again but what if your blocked by pain and the first is like the last and your heart is the target of stabs and his words echos like a bad nightmare it all reminds you of the treatment beated cheated mistreated, now is that fair shit! the scares i still bare my mother told me i was gold diamond and pearl to the sight of any mortal,very much rare maybe his sight isn’t right, in need of a prescription maybe im wrong in need of a new luv definition but its just another maybe, another honey, another cold night.

to the topic starter sister i do understand your frustration, when it comes to our young ones forgetting their culture. Its a great loss indeed. However, im mainly replying because I really don't understand, why you refer to african americans or other black nationalities as "adoons". I mean seriously who are you to call someone else an "adoon". The term is beyond racist and frankly as muslims, black muslims we should know better then to degrade other black nationalities in that way. Didn't mean to sound rude, but its seriously not right to use such words. Thats my 2 cent 1 luv to the motherland

to the topic starter sister i do understand your frustration, when it comes to our young ones forgetting their culture. Its a great loss indeed. However, im mainly replying because I really don't understand, why you refer to african americans or other black nationalities as "adoons". I mean seriously who are you to call someone else an "adoon". The term is beyond racist and frankly as muslims, black muslims we should know better then to degrade other black nationalities in that way. Didn't mean to sound rude, but its seriously not right to use such words. Thats my 2 cent 1 luv to the motherland

to the topic starter sister i do understand your frustration, when it comes to our young ones forgetting their culture. Its a great loss indeed. However, im mainly replying because I really don't understand, why you refer to african americans or other black nationalities as "adoons". I mean seriously who are you to call someone else an "adoon". The term is beyond racist and frankly as muslims, black muslims we should know better then to degrade other black nationalities in that way. Didn't mean to sound rude, but its seriously not right to use such words. Thats my 2 cent 1 luv to the motherland

to the topic starter sister i do understand your frustration, when it comes to our young ones forgetting their culture. Its a great loss indeed. However, im mainly replying because I really don't understand, why you refer to african americans or other black nationalities as "adoons". I mean seriously who are you to call someone else an "adoon". The term is beyond racist and frankly as muslims, black muslims we should know better then to degrade other black nationalities in that way. Didn't mean to sound rude, but its seriously not right to use such words. Thats my 2 cent 1 luv to the motherland

WOW! Now thats what i call lyrically talented! beautifully done diligence! May our people unite

Its been 3 days now feel like my mind is lost i try to maintain but its all in vain making sense of this is pointless reason won’t even reason with me and the heart is ploting against me any second my wall will brake yet, still confident walks i fake the nonchalant ways i tried but my heart exposed me now tell me through my lines can you read what i try so hard to delete

nafta and deligence your pieces were just FLY! heres my 2 cent: At times when im scared can you stand beside me be the warrior that protects me become my light when I can’t see right I really don’t need to be on a high flight indeed, I go by the name of Lois Lane if you don’t treat me like a plain Jane I’ll renounce on superman but your role of a man you must assume before you can consume my heart treasures I bring mental pleasures I reach beyond any physical features I please the mind searcher call me a mental nomad I’ll visit all your minds pleasureable spots keeping you always hot

Nas or Jay? hmmm It depends if were talking about beautifully mastered lyrics then NAS is the one and only....The king But phat beatz with catchy verses go to Jay so basically Nas is much better in a deeper level while Jay can rock the crowd Thats my 2Centz P-s: i still didn't get to hear the black album so Jay might become a bit deeper with his lyrics...( i doubt it thought)

Nas or Jay? hmmm It depends if were talking about beautifully mastered lyrics then NAS is the one and only....The king But phat beatz with catchy verses go to Jay so basically Nas is much better in a deeper level while Jay can rock the crowd Thats my 2Centz P-s: i still didn't get to hear the black album so Jay might become a bit deeper with his lyrics...( i doubt it thought)

Nas or Jay? hmmm It depends if were talking about beautifully mastered lyrics then NAS is the one and only....The king But phat beatz with catchy verses go to Jay so basically Nas is much better in a deeper level while Jay can rock the crowd Thats my 2Centz P-s: i still didn't get to hear the black album so Jay might become a bit deeper with his lyrics...( i doubt it thought)

Nas or Jay? hmmm It depends if were talking about beautifully mastered lyrics then NAS is the one and only....The king But phat beatz with catchy verses go to Jay so basically Nas is much better in a deeper level while Jay can rock the crowd Thats my 2Centz P-s: i still didn't get to hear the black album so Jay might become a bit deeper with his lyrics...( i doubt it thought)

salam ppl heres anotha PHAT song that i luv never knew a luh, luh-luh, a love like this Gotta be somethin for me to write this Queen, I ain't seen you in a minute Wrote this letter, and finally decide to send it Signed sealed delivered for us to grow together Love has no limit, let's spend it slow forever I know your heart is weathered by what studs did to you I ain't gon' assault em cause I probably did it too Because of you, feelings I handle with care Some niggaz recognize the light but they can't handle the glare You know I ain't the type to walk around with matchin shirts If relationship is effort I will match your work I wanna be the one to make you happiest, it hurts you the most They say the end is near, it's important that we close.. .. to the most, high Regardless of what happen on him let's rely There are times.. when you'll need someone.. I will be by your side.. There is a light, that shines, special for you, and me.. Yo, yo, check it It's important, we communicate and tune the fate of this union, to the right pitch I never call you my ***** or even my boo There's so much in a name and so much more in you Few understand the union of woman and man And sex and a tingle is where they assume that it land But that's fly by night for you and the sky I write For in these cold Chi night's moon, you my light If heaven had a height, you would be that tall Ghetto to coffee shop,through you I see that all Let's stick to understandin and we won't fall For better or worse times, I hope to me you call So I pray everyday more than anything friends will stay as we begin to lay this foundation for a family love ain't simple Why can't it be anything worth having you work at annually Granted we known each other for some time It don't take a whole day to recognize sunshine There are times.. when you'll need someone.. I will be by your side, oh darling There is a light, that shines, special for you, and me.. Yeah.. yo, yo, check it It's kinda fresh you listen to more than hip-hop and I can catch you in the mix from beauty to thrift shop Plus you ship hop when it's time to, thinkin you fresh Suggestin beats I should rhyme to At times when I'm lost I try to find you You know to give me space when it's time to My heart's dictionary defines you, it's love and happiness Truthfully it's hard tryin to practice abstinence The time we committed love it was real good Had to be for me to arrive and it still feel good I know the sex ain't gon' keep you, but as my equal it's how I must treat you As my reflection in light I'ma lead you And whatever's right, I'ma feed you Digga-da, digga-da, digga-da, digga-digga-da-da Yo I tell you the rest when I see you, peace There are times.. when you'll need someone.. I will be by your side.. There is a light, that shines, special for you, and me.. (I'll) take my chances.. before they pass.. .. pass me by, oh darling.. You need to look at the other side.. You'll agree.. Every single time i hear this song im always pleasantly surprised.Truly a nice piece

salam hazel, i liked your piece brief yet beautiful nice one. Heres my piece... Lately i’ve been thinking about you way to much for it to be healthy way too much that you became part of me way too much, that im scared now afraid to say words that could be foul but these thoughs are so consuming that my heart lets out invisible tears neverless tears they are you can only feel them by far i can’t stand no more being apart i want you so much near that im willing to show you all my fears as im writting this im wondering if my tears are like his my feelings are growing so fonder but are you gonna catch me when i fall, i truly wonder?

when a woman loves a man, she thinks, breathes, sees only him. when a woman loves a man if shes with him: she shows him whats right, always helps him see the light in every tunnel, she helps him better himself for this life and the after life, she becomes his cheerleader, his friend, his counselor, his warrior and his . Making him happy is her priority. But if shes not with him: she dreams about when they would be together.She tries her best to make him sees whats infront of him. :eek: Until he acknowledges her presences, she will wait patiently

Just came out of anotha meaningless words exchanged with a brotha time neva passes by when we lie you know the type that neva says what needs to be said when the heart is invisible and the touch leaves you empty you wonder if what they say is true you know that theory of luv the luv that makes your heart smile the one that you pray about keeps you so hard on your knees praying to your god please let me just see it once, tell my heart it exist, i've witnessed and felt it but each time i think his near its just disguised ones playing the role of my king and acting. isn't really their thing but how can you play the role of a king that role can only be played by one can’t wait until he comes into my play called the story of my life can hardly wait, hardly almost makes me wanna shout dear god, is what they say true will grey skies turn blue? L.L

In this train of confusion i ride solemnly throught the tunnel of verbs i traveled centuries to come back where i left off had plenty that turned me off thinking the way to a woman’s heart is money or over used and abused compliments sucking from the greatest relationship the last sentiment never taking time to understand a womans mind if only they knew thats were the gold lies instead they rather be verbal pimps over use every beautiful word their is just to get to a fractional lust turning every diamond to rust but some diamonds shine throught the light and show even the baddest crook whats right let me show you the way

Flying still i second the " What the.... :mad: I think the mother and father should both be in jail. Her for staying around with a men like that..and him ...(do i really need to say why?) for the child..the story is really sad may she rest in peace. but for the parents....i say jail time :mad:

This topic is sooo.... :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: