You see I intended to But then I just couldn’t pull through I had the courage too But my fingers where telling me not too It was a fight mind over body And in the end lets just say I’m sorry When I finally tried to something just came over me Like a cloud covering the SUNSHINE It could have been my insecurity Or it’s cuz I lack maturity Either case I’d like to apologize I know I’m like 3 hours late And even now I’m contemplating doing it But then I just can’t commit Don’t tell me I already know I must admit There is no commitments attached he said I guess I’m a coward And you sure don’t make me feel empowered Actually you’re pretty intimidating come to think of it But still in any case I’d like to apologize Does an apology suffice? I’d sure like some advice! I admit I aint no marry jane Nor am I insane I’ve tried to explain And I hope maybe we can try again Next time I’ll holla back You can count on that Give me some feed back people would you accept my apology

Love- Because it is better to have loved than never loved at all Trust- your instincts Believe- That anything is possible Fight- For a brighter future because with difficulty ease is not far behind Carry the burden- because good deeds are never gone unnoticed Laugh- Because it makes the heart grow fonder Sleep- Because you know a better day lies ahead Don’t cry- Because nothing is worth your tears Marry- The person who you were destined to marry Hope- Is what makes the hurt more bearable Give- Because there is always someone in need Pray- Because the Lord is all Knowing and hears what you’re saying Joy- In the small things life offers Today-is only 24 hours and tomorrow isn’t far away Never make a promise- Because you don’t know what the future holds Wishing- is the same thing as hoping Wish-God grants you paradise Breathe-Even when the going gets tuff because someone somewhere cares for you Remorse- Because it shows your human Live- life to its fullest "The state of your life is nothing more than a reflection of your state of mind." Cheer up mate

Well I must say, this I think is one of the best pieces you’ve wrote. I really enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work

That poem was very thought provoking; it was a good reminder that this world is merely a test. The way you managed to place the words in a sequence which flowed so gracefully was excellent . I could almost picture the whole scene in my head. Great job… Keep up the good work… SeE yA AroUnD!

I applaud a trillion times and more.. First and foremost I’d like to be the first person to offically welcome you to Somalia Online. I loved your poem.. keep up the good work mate..

Okay.. so who would your top 5 favorite Somalionline poets be…

Speechless… good work …

once again i must clarify that i'm not a brother but in fact a sister

Ya when I was choosing my name I didn’t want it to be gender specific.

LOOOOOOOOL if your talking about me.. i'm not a male..lool yes the name is rather masculine i agree

Me, I know who I am I know myself as me I am the person I was raised up to be I am who I believe myself to be And know myself to be If you’re an introvert Then I must be an Extrovert Because I’m nothing like you i'm almost certain But I wouldn’t mind being you Because I like your poetry Its has its own flowetry You’re confused about your identity But I’m sure you’ve got a great personality You ask who the hell am i? Well Madame that’s simple I’m the person you know me to be

Look deeper into the mirror And the reflection might get clearer For what you see is not what I perceive you to be Your dark eyes are very hypnotizing Can you see the sparkle? They glow and tell their own story A tale of glory Its darkness is like the night sky minus all the street lights And the stars visible even at those heights I see an aspiring poet A nomad with spirit Your eyes are half wide open And the reflection is hazed Take a deeper look And you’d see that Your exactly who you want to be I hope you’ll agree Viewer D

Bus Ride Ever feel like the world is against you And feel like nobody really cares for you That if you weren’t there everybody would continue Doing things they’ve always been doing Going places they’ve always been going. Ever stop to and notice…… Ever notice how people stare at you And when you look at them they pretend not to see you Wondering why you look the way you do Or dress in the manner that you do To them its oppression to me its liberation Evey stop to be….. Ever try and be someone your not and change your whole attitude just to fit in Do things you just normally wouldn’t do Wish you could just blend in with the background And blank out all that surrounds you Ever stop to reflect… Ever reflect on what’s going on in the world And think of what you’ve done to make a difference Like giving a homeless person a cup of tea for instance Small things can make a big impact And that’s a fact Ever close your eyes Ever try closing your eyes and being in that place you’ve always dreamed about A place where your brothers and sister aren’t dying And the breaking news isn’t about the increasing number of dead found in sir lanka Where aids doesn’t affect the people in Africa And people would just stop “misunderestimated†bush lol Every stop and think.. You spend way to much time on the bus And think way to much about a lot of stuff That will never change And that I’m probably insane. lool

I wish I was handing this in for an English class because you gave me a lot of useful tips

okay so was it that horrible.lool i mean if so, give me some insight about whats wrong.. i like to know how i can better my self..holla back