War balaayo! mansha'allah cuz aboowe you got a way with words..You are a male version of me looool don't I sound like such a narcisus. Okay you did this in a story format and it's open mic which means you come how ever you want it which is hard to criticize but couple of times I felt you put in words cuz they rhymed with the last word of the line other than that sh*t is dope. P.s Smokey don't Overdose on the Haterade. :rolleyes:

War balaayo! mansha'allah cuz aboowe you got a way with words..You are a male version of me looool don't I sound like such a narcisus. Okay you did this in a story format and it's open mic which means you come how ever you want it which is hard to criticize but couple of times I felt you put in words cuz they rhymed with the last word of the line other than that sh*t is dope. P.s Smokey don't Overdose on the Haterade. :rolleyes:

War balaayo! mansha'allah cuz aboowe you got a way with words..You are a male version of me looool don't I sound like such a narcisus. Okay you did this in a story format and it's open mic which means you come how ever you want it which is hard to criticize but couple of times I felt you put in words cuz they rhymed with the last word of the line other than that sh*t is dope. P.s Smokey don't Overdose on the Haterade. :rolleyes:

"I still loved this man, even though I knew he'd given it to me. I thought he'd done so unknowingly. :eek: I don't get shocked easily but this is interesting piece here. first of all let me thank god for blessing me with common sense and a conscience that steers me right if and when I commit even a minor sin.Mansha'allah for my religion for I don't have to worry about this happening to me. I'm a womanist to the heart but those women are an embarrassment excuse my rhetoric joggin but they are about dumb as a lamp post. that he had had a vasectomy and did not need to use protection so he can't have kids that don't mean he can't give you diseases. don't they have brains.sh*t lax kaniini cabtay miyaa(excuse my incorrect somali) Akhas as for abkow I don't know if he did it knowingly or not but he is an insolent son of a good hooyo who is probably crying her eyes out due to his dishonesty.

It's sad macaanto!

Sometimes I too hate poetry for you discover things you didn't know existed but its a poets Ink it will spread and grow in you like a tumor and picture this people it's a disease with no cure words coming at every direction with the help of keen preception like your cortex is playing ping pong with your cerebral Till you find that one perfect line and you keep +ing words piecing together suffix and prefix do the tango with nouns and verbs do you know such things as stanzas breath live through this....simple words that create Natural ideas with free expression that knows no bounds poems are boundaries that are boundless I'm an addict I shot up a page of poems to feel elated it's high yo! but some reject this oh what is poet but one who writes down incomplete in correct sentences and call it talent B*tches they're ...... we're miracles like a rose that grew from concrete Don't they know this poets ink is fetal Word!

If love was jazz It'd be brown eyed,6'4 and handsome with a smile so bright you'd think you seen a heavenly light Right...... If love was jazz I'd kidnap its sweet melodies wrap it up like a cacoon and demand its heart as ransom I'd steal its depth like a thief in the night Right.. If love was Jazz I'd be singing blues like Billie Holiday See, till my voice became deep as Barry B... but jazz aint love...love is.....simply and utterly just Is

Okay......well even though the challange isn't directed at me personally ..let me drop it........ Boy like "stevie wonder" as a "novelist" you can't "see" me in a "write off" - I'm up like "an erect penis" and u'll get "jerked off"- My name'll be engraved in your mind Due to my amazing rhymes- After this you gon' be a "silent f*ck" like two "mating mimes"- you can't win like the US on grungy foreigners I'll beat u like harry boramer but it doesn't matter...boy you couldn't "write a hot verse" if you "swallowed a lighter" then started "typing with your fingers on fire"

"Why are they there?". Still whispering, the young voice replied along with a muffled giggle, "They are looking for me!". LoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooL oh my allah what a twisted little Kid.

Tenth circle added to rapidly growing hell looool Istaaqfurulah. May allah forgive for having a chuckle at that one. I'm ashamed!

Every body is the same color when you turn off the light . the woman who wrote this is hypocritical. one minute she is arguing that Black women are viewed in the media as unattractive, the next she says there is an excemption to white wives of atheletes, then she says black women are forbidden fruit..then she says that even if a brother wants a beautiful black women he pictures her with white skin :rolleyes: I think she just wants that blaxopolition sister power type of shit in the '70's picture a room full of mean mugging black women screaming "Say that then"... :rolleyes: . this is funny So many black men just want women who have lustrous, silky, straight hair and “refined” Caucasian facial features. That to me describes some somali sisters I've seen.

Oh my allah....I jaceel shoes!!! the red heels with the ankle straps and addidas knock off boots are a killer.......Dangnamit Y'all got me drooling.

I had to struggle to read it since my somali isn't the truth but that was a killer punchline...... "Wallee waa soo qasaartay." looool I could picture my cousins saying that.

LooooooooL I know its a little ego stroking poem and it went over board ....but every body deserves a chance to put rockets in their personality just to boost their confidence.

wow :eek: that was descriptive,well worded and I understood where you were coming from. All to please the unhealthy desires of the body. My reason, love's doctor, Angry that I do not follow his directions, Has left me, and desperate I find that desire you tied that bar up very nicely.

Lets say you been sick for a while to the point you faint standing up. Finally, when you thought this sickness is getting out of hand like palm pilots,you mustered enough strenght to go see a doctor who told you candidly that you had only Twenty Four hours to live..... what would your reaction be? who would you notify? who would you spend with your last twenty four hours? or would you like Diddy said deny that you were about to die .......

First of all, Thank you for posting this topic. I'm doing my senior project on Female Genital Mutilation and I was trying to find what the ruling of this nonsensical practice was in Islam and any arguements supporting or opposing it. Thanks again.

Man of Wisdom I think that you just want to start an arguement with some females because you think they won't consider the facts or fully comprehend the question but will go straight in for the kill like somali women have been known to do and start insulting you. if that is the case let me tell you, you're like a fat girl with a bad personality you will lost on both ends. If i'm wrong then sorry to be crude....but what ever maaan! :rolleyes:

anways when when was the last time u smoke dro? That is down right crude and didn't sister girl type Please Refrain from negative comments :rolleyes:

War balaayo :eek: I liked it, very well written expressive to the point it made me wanna be mad and it seemed like I was feeling the same thing as you were as I was reading it. I love angst poems

Anybody can have a future in poetry...it's self expression there is no criteria for a good poet you just gotta stay on point and make sure your personality, feeling and what you're expressing comes of the page and grabs the reader and I must say your poem did that for me ....... life rewards you in strang ways and it all become ok. Aint that the truth Life isn't lord of flies and humans aren't bestial I have my feet on the ground but my head is celestial I see life's reflection through not rose tinged glasses but of those of darkness yet I rather be postive and bless y'all through my words learning life's lessons than be hard than thou chick to impress y'all Life isn't always the same true but who could forget seasonal memories song rifts and scents amongs evengings I saw that through and in the midst of my time spent I've no regrets slow jazz in the background hot hazy afternoon in seattle and i'm at a swimming pool to splash down don't you understand everything is okay cause i'm not living my life to die I live for life and I got nothing to worry about cuz everything is allright......Okay

Chosen One Balaayo dayum...... Cause who I'm talkin bout y'all is Hip-Hop. like Common said I sun so my cats they call me high noon.....think about it.

Chosen one.....this is deep complex and very arguementative to the just cause of being a muslim So what's outside of infinity? Nothing? For nothing is still something If there is nothing in my empty glass It is still full Of nothing And nothing is what we think When we toast and drink Our lives away and nothing is what we speak when we cuss and gossip every day and nothing is not knowing we weak takin' arms against the diin in every way and nothing is when you being told "Hold on...life is a struggle you gotta roll on" and nothing is when Muslims qoute what dead rappers say yet ex Gaalos seek Allah's knowledge like the shaytaan seeks minds to Irate and....to check in a hot room in Hell's in.... and nothing is doin anything to win with life yet you done taken a knife to the after life cuz you done sinned...... Muslim sis...mahadsanid abaayo my somali aint the truth but thank you what you typed is the truth I felt up lifted like my spirits went for a sprit.... Please, my brothers and sisters, think about what you're doing or might do, before you do it. The consequences are NOT worth it!!! True but few listen Yo....soon as Don't is mentioned ears turn off like radios.....they forget the power ALLAH hold's....now they're just molds..fashioned not to think so when it comes the religious doctrine they get cold in an instant...they're satans peasants.....and it aint nothing you and I could do then........the consequences are not worth it but they didn't think before they acted....and in judgement day Allah's wrath they face it

Chosen one.....this is deep complex and very arguementative to the just cause of being a muslim So what's outside of infinity? Nothing? For nothing is still something If there is nothing in my empty glass It is still full Of nothing And nothing is what we think When we toast and drink Our lives away and nothing is what we speak when we cuss and gossip every day and nothing is not knowing we weak takin' arms against the diin in every way and nothing is when you being told "Hold on...life is a struggle you gotta roll on" and nothing is when Muslims qoute what dead rappers say yet ex Gaalos seek Allah's knowledge like the shaytaan seeks minds to Irate and....to check in a hot room in Hell's in.... and nothing is doin anything to win with life yet you done taken a knife to the after life cuz you done sinned...... Muslim sis...mahadsanid abaayo my somali aint the truth but thank you what you typed is the truth I felt up lifted like my spirits went for a sprit.... Please, my brothers and sisters, think about what you're doing or might do, before you do it. The consequences are NOT worth it!!! True but few listen Yo....soon as Don't is mentioned ears turn off like radios.....they forget the power ALLAH hold's....now they're just molds..fashioned not to think so when it comes the religious doctrine they get cold in an instant...they're satans peasants.....and it aint nothing you and I could do then........the consequences are not worth it but they didn't think before they acted....and in judgements Allah's wrath they face it

lol@Bone-Meet. nasty? okey....Thurr* Am done wit' dis Okay about the Bone-Meet being nasty like I said if we aren't on the same page forget it...lol Tanikiyu feeri armaajo Soul.....girl you are make me Blushink. istaaji puhleese. lol I did murder it though huh....just maybe wax yariis.