poetress

Nomads
  • Content Count

    36
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by poetress

  1. definately. u know it's true love when u know evrything about some one, the good and the bad, and u would still in the blink of an eye give up anything for them. u don't gotta love your soul, god does that for u already so it's possible to love another soul more.
  2. definately. u know it's true love when u know evrything about some one, the good and the bad, and u would still in the blink of an eye give up anything for them. u don't gotta love your soul, god does that for u already so it's possible to love another soul more.
  3. definately. u know it's true love when u know evrything about some one, the good and the bad, and u would still in the blink of an eye give up anything for them. u don't gotta love your soul, god does that for u already so it's possible to love another soul more.
  4. definately. u know it's true love when u know evrything about some one, the good and the bad, and u would still in the blink of an eye give up anything for them. u don't gotta love your soul, god does that for u already so it's possible to love another soul more.
  5. i ain't no rapptress or nuthin, i ain't claimin nuthin, so don't come at me like that. here goes: Innocence Departs What happens when innocence departs? Does it fly off like a bird, sad, dark, and sullen as the crow? Or feel slowly 4 its exits, while blind hands stumble over surfaces Does it shrivel up and die, Or help u blossom further into life Does it break like cracks in a sore? Leaving long-forgotten, torrid memories Or is its failure 2 imprint depressions within or subconscious Why many people run 2 derive from it Innocence, is it treasured or useless? The child of the conscience Such questions r ambiguous, 4 no answers spring from them Does my mind hold answers? None of the such, 4 my innocence departed with the Icarus' luck *this one's free verse. i usually write free verse cuz i think it allows for greater use of metaphors and and other analytical comparisons. but when it comes 2 ballads, sonnets, etc. i usually write in rhyming 14 line total (italin style), with 2 6 line stanzas and a final 2 line ryhming couplet. it also helps to write using a refrain except that repeated line don't ryhme, but that's where poetic license comes into play.
  6. i ain't no rapptress or nuthin, i ain't claimin nuthin, so don't come at me like that. here goes: Innocence Departs What happens when innocence departs? Does it fly off like a bird, sad, dark, and sullen as the crow? Or feel slowly 4 its exits, while blind hands stumble over surfaces Does it shrivel up and die, Or help u blossom further into life Does it break like cracks in a sore? Leaving long-forgotten, torrid memories Or is its failure 2 imprint depressions within or subconscious Why many people run 2 derive from it Innocence, is it treasured or useless? The child of the conscience Such questions r ambiguous, 4 no answers spring from them Does my mind hold answers? None of the such, 4 my innocence departed with the Icarus' luck *this one's free verse. i usually write free verse cuz i think it allows for greater use of metaphors and and other analytical comparisons. but when it comes 2 ballads, sonnets, etc. i usually write in rhyming 14 line total (italin style), with 2 6 line stanzas and a final 2 line ryhming couplet. it also helps to write using a refrain except that repeated line don't ryhme, but that's where poetic license comes into play.
  7. i ain't no rapptress or nuthin, i ain't claimin nuthin, so don't come at me like that. here goes: Innocence Departs What happens when innocence departs? Does it fly off like a bird, sad, dark, and sullen as the crow? Or feel slowly 4 its exits, while blind hands stumble over surfaces Does it shrivel up and die, Or help u blossom further into life Does it break like cracks in a sore? Leaving long-forgotten, torrid memories Or is its failure 2 imprint depressions within or subconscious Why many people run 2 derive from it Innocence, is it treasured or useless? The child of the conscience Such questions r ambiguous, 4 no answers spring from them Does my mind hold answers? None of the such, 4 my innocence departed with the Icarus' luck *this one's free verse. i usually write free verse cuz i think it allows for greater use of metaphors and and other analytical comparisons. but when it comes 2 ballads, sonnets, etc. i usually write in rhyming 14 line total (italin style), with 2 6 line stanzas and a final 2 line ryhming couplet. it also helps to write using a refrain except that repeated line don't ryhme, but that's where poetic license comes into play.
  8. i wish he was alive, i really do. but u cain't help but be skeptical. that nigga was so talented and meant so much to so many people. even if he gone, his lives on through his music and in our memories. i can't think of a 2pac song i did not love, everythang he did was amazing. i don't think there has ever been an artist of any manner that was more versatile and legendary than him. he was an amazing rapper, actor,humanitarian, and his music ain't goin no where. his new album titled "Better Dayz" is supposed 2 be droppin in November, and he had finnished like 200 unreleased songs before his death, and that's enough material for at least 10 more albums. he's also supposed to be releasing another double-dis sometime, but i'm not sure when. here's the cover of Better Dayz, just so y'all know, everything that i wrote is just news from the record companies, and are tenative 2 change. http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B000075BFK.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg
  9. i wish he was alive, i really do. but u cain't help but be skeptical. that nigga was so talented and meant so much to so many people. even if he gone, his lives on through his music and in our memories. i can't think of a 2pac song i did not love, everythang he did was amazing. i don't think there has ever been an artist of any manner that was more versatile and legendary than him. he was an amazing rapper, actor,humanitarian, and his music ain't goin no where. his new album titled "Better Dayz" is supposed 2 be droppin in November, and he had finnished like 200 unreleased songs before his death, and that's enough material for at least 10 more albums. he's also supposed to be releasing another double-dis sometime, but i'm not sure when. here's the cover of Better Dayz, just so y'all know, everything that i wrote is just news from the record companies, and are tenative 2 change. http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B000075BFK.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg
  10. i wish he was alive, i really do. but u cain't help but be skeptical. that nigga was so talented and meant so much to so many people. even if he gone, his lives on through his music and in our memories. i can't think of a 2pac song i did not love, everythang he did was amazing. i don't think there has ever been an artist of any manner that was more versatile and legendary than him. he was an amazing rapper, actor,humanitarian, and his music ain't goin no where. his new album titled "Better Dayz" is supposed 2 be droppin in November, and he had finnished like 200 unreleased songs before his death, and that's enough material for at least 10 more albums. he's also supposed to be releasing another double-dis sometime, but i'm not sure when. here's the cover of Better Dayz, just so y'all know, everything that i wrote is just news from the record companies, and are tenative 2 change. http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B000075BFK.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg
  11. i wish he was alive, i really do. but u cain't help but be skeptical. that nigga was so talented and meant so much to so many people. even if he gone, his lives on through his music and in our memories. i can't think of a 2pac song i did not love, everythang he did was amazing. i don't think there has ever been an artist of any manner that was more versatile and legendary than him. he was an amazing rapper, actor,humanitarian, and his music ain't goin no where. his new album titled "Better Dayz" is supposed 2 be droppin in November, and he had finnished like 200 unreleased songs before his death, and that's enough material for at least 10 more albums. he's also supposed to be releasing another double-dis sometime, but i'm not sure when. here's the cover of Better Dayz, just so y'all know, everything that i wrote is just news from the record companies, and are tenative 2 change. http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B000075BFK.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg