Jungle_City

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  1. wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc
  2. wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc
  3. wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc
  4. hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV
  5. hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV
  6. hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV
  7. true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:
  8. true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:
  9. true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:
  10. Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum
  11. Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum
  12. Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum
  13. as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me
  14. as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me
  15. as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me
  16. no no no...shani u need this kinda talent to challenge, thiz is all bullsh!t....respond: In a Summary.... Your whole career‘s just a "Big Pun", wanna be Phat (Fat) but “*** ’s say” (Jose) that Jealous Ones, Still Envy.......My foes I leave 'em jointless, me battlin you is like a pencil with no lead, "It's pointless", and you still want to battle? But know that them guns buss daily, **** knucklin, I carry the "22" like "Duece Staley"... and you can't stand but to like this, try to fight ***** and have ya life, cut off like a light switch............ your reaction is??
  17. no no no...shani u need this kinda talent to challenge, thiz is all bullsh!t....respond: In a Summary.... Your whole career‘s just a "Big Pun", wanna be Phat (Fat) but “*** ’s say” (Jose) that Jealous Ones, Still Envy.......My foes I leave 'em jointless, me battlin you is like a pencil with no lead, "It's pointless", and you still want to battle? But know that them guns buss daily, **** knucklin, I carry the "22" like "Duece Staley"... and you can't stand but to like this, try to fight ***** and have ya life, cut off like a light switch............ your reaction is??
  18. no no no...shani u need this kinda talent to challenge, thiz is all bullsh!t....respond: In a Summary.... Your whole career‘s just a "Big Pun", wanna be Phat (Fat) but “*** ’s say” (Jose) that Jealous Ones, Still Envy.......My foes I leave 'em jointless, me battlin you is like a pencil with no lead, "It's pointless", and you still want to battle? But know that them guns buss daily, **** knucklin, I carry the "22" like "Duece Staley"... and you can't stand but to like this, try to fight ***** and have ya life, cut off like a light switch............ your reaction is??
  19. good flow people, keep aiming to the top. rap mistres is off the hiziiiiiiy, dam homegirl. scarface, keep doin' ya thang bro. peace people luv iz in da air..with somali'z around
  20. good flow people, keep aiming to the top. rap mistres is off the hiziiiiiiy, dam homegirl. scarface, keep doin' ya thang bro. peace people luv iz in da air..with somali'z around
  21. good flow people, keep aiming to the top. rap mistres is off the hiziiiiiiy, dam homegirl. scarface, keep doin' ya thang bro. peace people luv iz in da air..with somali'z around
  22. mizz gangsta shani..this is for play: Give it up, sons up, but ya only shadow doubt.. So when ya dad beats u don’t expect a shout.. Juss cuz ya post don’t me ya here.. I saw ya drop 2 lines that disappear.. Don’t say it was cuz the rbl gone.. Just cuz ya life left ya don’t mean ya done.. This is a battle of wits u have none.. So lets call it even and take down the latter.. Cuz crawlin up don’t me ya deserve better.. Let’s juss say ull always be outta reach.. Like ya was when the rbl was breached.. Kid ya punches been strait warped.. Ever sense u came here u been corpse.. Considering ya styles mleek and ya old.. Why come back when the colors fold.. much luv
  23. mizz gangsta shani..this is for play: Give it up, sons up, but ya only shadow doubt.. So when ya dad beats u don’t expect a shout.. Juss cuz ya post don’t me ya here.. I saw ya drop 2 lines that disappear.. Don’t say it was cuz the rbl gone.. Just cuz ya life left ya don’t mean ya done.. This is a battle of wits u have none.. So lets call it even and take down the latter.. Cuz crawlin up don’t me ya deserve better.. Let’s juss say ull always be outta reach.. Like ya was when the rbl was breached.. Kid ya punches been strait warped.. Ever sense u came here u been corpse.. Considering ya styles mleek and ya old.. Why come back when the colors fold.. much luv
  24. mizz gangsta shani..this is for play: Give it up, sons up, but ya only shadow doubt.. So when ya dad beats u don’t expect a shout.. Juss cuz ya post don’t me ya here.. I saw ya drop 2 lines that disappear.. Don’t say it was cuz the rbl gone.. Just cuz ya life left ya don’t mean ya done.. This is a battle of wits u have none.. So lets call it even and take down the latter.. Cuz crawlin up don’t me ya deserve better.. Let’s juss say ull always be outta reach.. Like ya was when the rbl was breached.. Kid ya punches been strait warped.. Ever sense u came here u been corpse.. Considering ya styles mleek and ya old.. Why come back when the colors fold.. much luv
  25. WHO IN YOUR FAVOUR IS THE NICESNOMAD IN THIS PLACE? I MET ALOT OF HORRIBLE PPL, AND ALOT OF NICE CARING PPL. RATE THEM, LET ME KNOW JUST FOR THOUGHT. BUT DONT CRITICIZE YOLL