wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc

wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc

wat a funny battle maynnnnnnnnn This battle was kinda and kinda not Even... I've seen rap mistress drop alot nicer shit then this.. I'm Disappointed. A lot of them lines were just thrown Aimlessly. Some hit nicely others I had to read Twice to get.. I was loving the Flow, it really made the Good lines in your verse Stand out... & The Closer was nice too tho.. skillz had some iight punches Like Ice burgh linez. but nothing more.. the other punches were "Eh".. You held back tho... You Treated this like it was a Newbie Battle & you were some Great Renown Vet emcee wasting some time battling a Underling... But this was not the Case.. Your verse didn't suck but it was Rather Mediocre I could tell you didn't spend any time on this.. you didn't even match Her line for Line.. If you had Youdda won my vote.. But those lines didn't do it for you here foooooooool.. VOTE=rap mistres juz ma word...pc

hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV

hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV

hey shacni abayo macan, whats all that beef about inyour hood. i know i been gone for a while now,but why r thingz so hectic now girl? wats this 'bout someGgettin' aknife and sh*t. juz calm down girl, ama be bak in june...dont get yourself in no trouble. ur doin good in school now, so keep it up abayo macaney...dont let these foolish qaxooti's bring you down. you got a good life ahead of you, i can tell.... your bro frmthe soul.. 1LuV

true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:

true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:

true that sista. your rhymes were Real Dope, your sweet vocab sent Scar-Face to rehab. loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool your both real good, but the girls got it going on, whoevers in her way gets spit at 2 times and deceased...loooooooooooooooooooooooool she's like..."next" looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool my somali people got it on lock :eek:

Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum

Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum

Good use of a multi-syllabic rhyme scheme. Some of the lines were perhaps a bit long, which made the flow a tad choppy. It wasn't bad though. Some of your lines weren't hitting hard enough, although they had the multi's within them, what you were actually saying wasn't too crash hot. Some lines were real dope. Some real nice use of wordplay in your verse. The Noble line was nice, but you should've followed up with some'n harder. I liked the suprise you line. Lost ya rain line was nice, however played. The matter of a fact line was DOPE. Real nice work man. However you should've finished the verse with that, rather than the line you followed up with. That way your ending on a punch, and a good one, which leaves readers impressed when they finish* your skills are overall impressive, keep it going sis.* I overheard a couple of friends speaking of some battle going down in May at Karma Club with somali Mc's only. when is that sis? S/aleykum

as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me

as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me

as my fellow adoons would say " dat no make it" like storm said...this is 'aparent' but you dun knew this cause mothers know best, but this ma's just stupid i got this on lock, yah heads blue n yah chockin, be so only opt that'l be chosen will be votin for me im totin with ease, spark shots to fill yah with dark spots and youl have less signs of life than ha's site got this dike flops and id take you out permanantly but then exs' ''***** of the crew'' spot'l be empty you tryta say goodbye but you'l choke..quote what macy said cause i clowned yah before yah death just like gacy did match me